My world of words: All alone

Sunday, February 13, 2005

All alone

Am all alone

Within myself
In a crowd
In the inner reaches
of my soul.
In moments
of conflict.
In moments of peace
A serene stillness of
deathly quiet exists.
That I cannot touch
but feel and be touched by it.
It feels like bliss

4 comments:

Oreen said...: i like it because it doesn't have one extra word . . . than necessary. and it has spurred me on to read the rest . . .; 11:33 AM
Pincushion said...: 'That I cannot touch
but feel and be touched by it.'

I can feeeeeel the stillness. Beautifully expressed !

Btw am linking to you. Thank you for sharing :); 7:38 PM
. : A : . said...: Lonely but beautiful. As the earlier comment said. It does not have one extra word.

Thanks for dropping by my site and commenting. Look forward to seeing you again!; 10:30 AM
Pragya said...: This is an amazing poem Jyo! One can feel the bliss!

Prags; 7:47 AM