Petite et gentile! Very endearing ,delicate lines! There are so many ways it can be interpreted... mother moulding a child, How instances in life moulds you, etc... covers a whole sphere of things... really nice
I wish we could andle all the things that passes by hands with care ...and think that they have living soul ...how our world will be better with such concept
Simplicity is the essence of beauty!
ReplyDeleteYour verse proves it.
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ReplyDelete"I am" is a powerful way to begin such a soft poem. You may be fragile, but your words are strong.
ReplyDeleteEach soul deserves to be handled with delicacy, especially the souls that emit the graceful light of true presence.
ReplyDeleteStill can't figure out if your name is Jyotsna or not, but it suits you!
strong vibes.
ReplyDeleteSimple and beautiful.
ReplyDeletePetite et gentile! Very endearing ,delicate lines! There are so many ways it can be interpreted... mother moulding a child, How instances in life moulds you, etc... covers a whole sphere of things... really nice
ReplyDeleteshort sweet and powerful!
ReplyDeletesimple n sweet :D loved it!
ReplyDeletehey jyotsna!!! loved this one...short sweet and loaded! thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...keep them coming!
ReplyDeletehey jyotsna!!! loved this one...short sweet and loaded! thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...keep them coming!
ReplyDeletewow!!! jus amazing!!! stinging to be precise...
ReplyDeleteI wish we could andle all the things that passes by hands with care ...and think that they have living soul ...how our world will be better with such concept
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