Thursday, March 24, 2005

I am

I am a fragile clay pot
easily molded
easily broken....

Handle me with care for,
I have a soul within
brimming with wisdom and love....

13 comments:

Pincushion said...

Simplicity is the essence of beauty!
Your verse proves it.
:)

PoeticMermaid said...
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stan laurel said...

"I am" is a powerful way to begin such a soft poem. You may be fragile, but your words are strong.

PoeticMermaid said...

Each soul deserves to be handled with delicacy, especially the souls that emit the graceful light of true presence.

Still can't figure out if your name is Jyotsna or not, but it suits you!

Billy said...

strong vibes.

. : A : . said...

Simple and beautiful.

Neets said...

Petite et gentile! Very endearing ,delicate lines! There are so many ways it can be interpreted... mother moulding a child, How instances in life moulds you, etc... covers a whole sphere of things... really nice

Ansh said...

short sweet and powerful!

niddlesriddles said...

simple n sweet :D loved it!

sheetal said...

hey jyotsna!!! loved this one...short sweet and loaded! thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...keep them coming!

sheetal said...

hey jyotsna!!! loved this one...short sweet and loaded! thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...keep them coming!

reNUka said...

wow!!! jus amazing!!! stinging to be precise...

iamnasra said...

I wish we could andle all the things that passes by hands with care ...and think that they have living soul ...how our world will be better with such concept