A birthday celebration,
a group of friends,
the candles were in place,
all were smiles,
happy, light and joyous
energies were palpable.
She blew the candles,
the song was sung
the cake was cut
clapping and cheering
I watched and smiled at their happiness...
She smeared chocolate over his lips.
He gently touched her lips with the chocolate too.
And then they kissed each other
chocolate kisses
laughing and giggling
the camera clicked.....
:)
I am no voyeur but a "people observer".I had a lazy afternoon coffee at "theobroma"(Food of the Gods),an eatery and the sight of tender unspoken love made me feel very good.
"People watcher"...arent we all :) Lovely poem! Thanks for dropping by on my blog and leaving that comment :)
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Very nice...non-intrusive :)
ReplyDeletechocolate kissses...yummm...sounds good
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Jyo! Guilty of many such day to day "voyeuristic" pleasures!
ReplyDeletehappy happy days! And I can see the word verification down below says "xpuds"! Even he agrees!
ReplyDeleteI am with asmita made me hungrey!
ReplyDeleteNo, you were not a voyeur. You observed a moment between two people, and heard the unspoken, felt the emotions. I'm smiling just reading this:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful and simple. you caught a wonderful glimpse of the best of human nature. moments like these must be saved for those times when we need to be reminded of the good in people.
ReplyDeleteWow! :)
ReplyDeleteCheered me up immensely. Chocolate and kisses should go together :-D
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks for your comments!
ReplyDeleteits a lovely poem and there was nothing 'voyueristic' about it, more of a celebration of tenderness and affection.
ReplyDeleteand i love the term chochlate kisses....mmmmmmm! :)
i love chocolaty kisses too. delicious!
ReplyDeleteAnd these are lovely observations!
ReplyDeleteWell captured.
lovely :)
ReplyDeleteOh, how sweet!
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xcellent wrk here Jo. Thanks a bunch for dropping by :)
ReplyDeletewhen are you writing something new?
ReplyDeletetime for a new post...
ReplyDeletelovely moments captured for all eternity! this brought a smile to my face :)
ReplyDeletecertainly NOT voyeuristic! just sweet!
:))
Greetings from California. You or someone from your site paid me a visit. So I went to your blog. Loved the poems.
ReplyDeleteoh my god - the chocolate mousse at theobroma is divine! If only I owned the place!
ReplyDeleteyooooooooooooooo hoooooooooooooooooooooooo
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