Wednesday, September 28, 2005

Tears

Pools of sadness
filled to the brim...
I try to heal them
but
they never spill......

20 comments:

velvetgunther said...

That's nice! And you're most welcome to my CDs

EATING POETRY said...

These few words convey the emotion so well.

Thanks for stopping by my blog, come again, Khaya

velvetgunther said...

Thanks again for your kind words and encouragement

Mridula said...

How well you express in so few words.

Cecilia said...

Powerful.

(you made me tear up)

gulnaz said...

god! i loved this!!
you have captured something i often feel but have never been able to articulate it so simply and so beautifully!
wow!

wooster said...

i must've pointed out earlier that i'm poetically challenged. but from this piece of yours i can tell its profound :)

thanks for dropping by! :)

stan laurel said...

they may never spill, but we will always try to heal.

mermaid said...

What's containing them? I've noticed a new style here. You say so much so so little.

Jyotsna said...

Tx VG!I will take you up on the offer soon!
Khaya,tx for dropping by and the appreciation.
Mridula,hi and thanks! hope to see you here again!
Cecilia,been ages since ive heard from you..Tears can be a powerful release!
Gulnaz,hi and hugs..thanks..i guess tears move me too much especially the unshed ones
Stan,true..our healing continues even through unshed tears.Thanks for your comment.I truly appreciate them!
Mermaid.. we are surely on the same wavelength.i was sure you would mention the new few words style..i seem to be having fewer words for my myraid emotions.Hugs for you and blessings always!
:)

Me said...

your words bring the touch of your sadness into the readers and we float with you...
excellent...

kaaju katli said...

Heartbreaking.

Faith said...

This is how I really feel right now..
Beautiful, so much said with little words..

IRIS said...

Beautiful.....as always:-)

Known Stranger said...

i was browsing on bloggers and got to your page and noticed one of your poem on tears. Hmm i scribbled something on that too.

ArchanaD said...

wow!
theres too much noise which doesn't allow you to deal with each voice, one at a time!

Known Stranger said...

Absolutely true. A lesson from love is worth a pain to bear.

Anonymous said...

I feel the same
Drowning in a pool of sadness
I can not maintain a float
The current of sadness pulls me down
Into deep water I cannot rise
To reach out to the surface
Yet the tears do not spill out

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us


www.iamnasra.blogspot.com

Sundar said...

sadness....when experienced in toto, we transcend...into bliss...the art of experiencing which i feel every human should learn...has helped me...
if u wud like check out, art of suffering on my blog archives...unconditional sharings....

Abhishek said...

way 2 go.....