Poetry and prose,random thoughts and outpourings
I also write at http://myjourneywithanandita.blogspot.com/
magicallabyrinth.blogspot.com
Sunday, September 25, 2005
Sun
As I stand silently by the sea and its lapping waves, you embrace me in your warmth, your radiance,the spark that uplifts me,awakens me... to a new morning..
Today I found another aquarian...very warm and sweet from far and hot and unbearable when you go near - that's the sun. Beuatiful poetry u have wrote here :)
Your poems have a certain visual quality in them. This one reminds me of a painting by Munch (no, not "The Scream")
ReplyDeleteWow I love the way you embrace the new day and it has so much love
ReplyDeleteThankyou velvetgunther!I need to work on my knowledge on paintings,am sure with your help i will:)
ReplyDeleteiamnasra,thanks so much!i live by the sea and i am lucky enough to live in a house where i can view both the sunrise and the sunset..
love your relationship with the sun. very warm and sweet.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!
ReplyDelete~ A
I love the sea and what lovely verses you have written.
ReplyDeleteand in case you hadn't noticed, i've linked you :)
ReplyDeleteToday I found another aquarian...very warm and sweet from far and hot and unbearable when you go near - that's the sun.
ReplyDeleteBeuatiful poetry u have wrote here :)
in your words,i can almost see the sunrise over the ocean. very nice!
ReplyDeleteit paints a very vivid pic in my mind. beautiful...
ReplyDeletei can feel the warmth...makes me miss the ocean.
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