Sunday, September 25, 2005

Sun

As I stand silently by the sea
and its lapping waves,
you embrace me in your warmth,
your radiance,the spark that
uplifts me,awakens me...
to a new morning..

I welcome you with open arms.

11 comments:

  1. Your poems have a certain visual quality in them. This one reminds me of a painting by Munch (no, not "The Scream")

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  2. Wow I love the way you embrace the new day and it has so much love

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  3. Thankyou velvetgunther!I need to work on my knowledge on paintings,am sure with your help i will:)

    iamnasra,thanks so much!i live by the sea and i am lucky enough to live in a house where i can view both the sunrise and the sunset..

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  4. love your relationship with the sun. very warm and sweet.

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  5. Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!

    ~ A

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  6. I love the sea and what lovely verses you have written.

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  7. and in case you hadn't noticed, i've linked you :)

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  8. Today I found another aquarian...very warm and sweet from far and hot and unbearable when you go near - that's the sun.
    Beuatiful poetry u have wrote here :)

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  9. in your words,i can almost see the sunrise over the ocean. very nice!

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  10. it paints a very vivid pic in my mind. beautiful...

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  11. i can feel the warmth...makes me miss the ocean.

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