Poetry and prose,random thoughts and outpourings
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Yet again, on a similar wavelenth. This will go down as one of my favorite "peace" poems:) I especially loved the dancing clouds image..."just skimming the surface".
Very delicately woven together. Good imagery.
such serentiy in those words!beutiful!!
As you are already aware, I am experimenting with using a minimum of words to express myself. I applaud your series of poems here. I particularly like this one because of the imagery:occasional ripplesdancing cloudsskimming the surface.GREAT!
what is calm is not the mind.mind is itself the ripple..
If your wordsMay linger let it be in my soulLoved it so much Your poetry
My soul A silent lake Occasionally Im awaken with ripplesYet I absorb it swirls iton my silent mood Yes you do inspire me with your words
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