Monday, August 08, 2005

Mind

Calm as a lake
touched by
occasional ripples..
gentle refelections of
dancing clouds..
pass by just
skimming the surface.

8 comments:

kaaju katli said...

Delicate :-)

mermaid said...

Yet again, on a similar wavelenth. This will go down as one of my favorite "peace" poems:) I especially loved the dancing clouds image..."just skimming the surface".

. : A : . said...

Very delicately woven together. Good imagery.

gulnaz said...

such serentiy in those words!
beutiful!!

stan laurel said...

As you are already aware, I am experimenting with using a minimum of words to express myself. I applaud your series of poems here. I particularly like this one because of the imagery:

occasional ripples
dancing clouds
skimming the surface.

GREAT!

Anonymous said...

what is calm is not the mind.mind is itself the ripple..

iamnasra said...

If your words
May linger
let it be in my soul

Loved it so much
Your poetry

iamnasra said...

My soul
A silent lake
Occasionally Im awaken with ripples
Yet I absorb it swirls iton my silent mood

Yes you do inspire me with your words