Monday, August 08, 2005

Mind

Calm as a lake
touched by
occasional ripples..
gentle refelections of
dancing clouds..
pass by just
skimming the surface.

8 comments:

  1. Yet again, on a similar wavelenth. This will go down as one of my favorite "peace" poems:) I especially loved the dancing clouds image..."just skimming the surface".

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  2. Very delicately woven together. Good imagery.

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  3. such serentiy in those words!
    beutiful!!

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  4. As you are already aware, I am experimenting with using a minimum of words to express myself. I applaud your series of poems here. I particularly like this one because of the imagery:

    occasional ripples
    dancing clouds
    skimming the surface.

    GREAT!

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  5. Anonymous4:09 PM

    what is calm is not the mind.mind is itself the ripple..

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  6. If your words
    May linger
    let it be in my soul

    Loved it so much
    Your poetry

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  7. My soul
    A silent lake
    Occasionally Im awaken with ripples
    Yet I absorb it swirls iton my silent mood

    Yes you do inspire me with your words

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