Yet again, on a similar wavelenth. This will go down as one of my favorite "peace" poems:) I especially loved the dancing clouds image..."just skimming the surface".
As you are already aware, I am experimenting with using a minimum of words to express myself. I applaud your series of poems here. I particularly like this one because of the imagery:
occasional ripples dancing clouds skimming the surface.
Delicate :-)
ReplyDeleteYet again, on a similar wavelenth. This will go down as one of my favorite "peace" poems:) I especially loved the dancing clouds image..."just skimming the surface".
ReplyDeleteVery delicately woven together. Good imagery.
ReplyDeletesuch serentiy in those words!
ReplyDeletebeutiful!!
As you are already aware, I am experimenting with using a minimum of words to express myself. I applaud your series of poems here. I particularly like this one because of the imagery:
ReplyDeleteoccasional ripples
dancing clouds
skimming the surface.
GREAT!
what is calm is not the mind.mind is itself the ripple..
ReplyDeleteIf your words
ReplyDeleteMay linger
let it be in my soul
Loved it so much
Your poetry
My soul
ReplyDeleteA silent lake
Occasionally Im awaken with ripples
Yet I absorb it swirls iton my silent mood
Yes you do inspire me with your words