Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Just a thought

Uncharted zone
transitory
perhaps,
like treading on egg shells
crackling
beneath.

12 comments:

aa said...

I like your poems. They're short, but they stay on your mind like a memory.

gulnaz said...

one can feel the nervousness in this. very well written!

. : A : . said...

Nice one. Good imagery.

S.L. Corsua said...

A struggle with apprehension. ^_^ Wonderfully put.

Adrian Neibauer said...

This is more than just a thought. It is poetic truth.

Anonymous said...

it is always transitory.everything.

Pincushion said...

Succinct and pointed. It hits home with the underlying truth.
Keep 'em coming :)

Jyotsna said...

Thanks so much free spirit-for dropping by:)
Gulnaz,A,Stan,Soulless..yes it does reveal a tentativeness and a fragility..thanks so much :)
write setting-trued to go to your blog but with no luck.
Anon--transitory yes..we all are impermanent.
Pins-good to have u back on my blog..HUGS!

Sindhuja Parthasarathy said...

The anxiety and nervouness in trying something new?such intense beauty Ma'm!!

Adrian Neibauer said...

uncharted? yes. lost? no.

iamnasra said...

the road seems unclear in the poet mind..but he sind deeper he knows in his heart where he is heading...

Great play with words

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