Poetry and prose,random thoughts and outpourings
I also write at http://myjourneywithanandita.blogspot.com/
nice, thought-evoking words!
good post! interesting!
I'm not sure if this alludes to a life partner, but I immediately feel your loneliness. When a loved one reacts to a given situation in a different manner, it is so hard not to feel cold in the shade.Hopefully, you will meet again somewhere at the line where light meets dark.
light and shade...but different aspects fo the same....
I love this Jyo! :))
good! I saw it first!
Whoa!That was beautiful!The picture enhances the power of words!(even though i suspect the exercise was vice versa)
Shubho-thanks..the pic was thought provoking!Arzooon--tx for dropping by!Rohit-thanks :) Mermaid-it actually alluded to the pic posted for a writing exercise and the striking bit of the photo was the contrast between light and shade! thanks n hugsSundar--thanks..:)Blue A--hugs and glad you loved it!VG--yes yes you did see it first..see how much i value your opinion :D :DMotorama--thanks,yes the pic is truly powerful!
You chose the ideal image for such a poem. I like the contrast you establish of the 2 mental states: this reads very well!
how are you J. catching you up after long time. vaishnav
wow! this is brilliant jyo! :-))
well written. the black n white picture I guess adds to the impact.great blog :)
Did you get my email about the blog? If not, I will mail another.
This is a beautiful moment of contemplation. The photo really brings together the sense of opposites. Well done!
ying and yang??
nice "close reading" of those details (light & shade) in the photo.cheers, d.i.
One of the best I read on that theme :) Lovely!-KK
Wow Im wordless Loved this poetry
Looovvved it! ^_^ You have done extremely well on that writing exercise, Jo.Oh, by the way, have a truly blessed new year, dear. ^_^
Wish you a happy new year ahead!!!Keep blogging!!
This is truly poignant and starkly beautiful! You've captured the essence of the picture so well!Have a wonderful New Year!Huggggs! :)
Hey, happy New Year and thanks for posting.
lovely words, as ever. thanks so much for your wishes, Jyo. Wish you year full of happiness and joy. :-)
Beautiful thoughts and poems.And yes, a woman does shape lives only sometimes it becomes difficult to shape her own :).
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In the marble orchardof stark stillnesswe remain separated intime.You bask in the sunwhile I grieve inthe chill of theshadewith emotions being shuttled in winds.some how missed this exercise in ryze.
i am gonna put this thing in one of my blogs....mind if i??(courtsey: jyotsna)cuz this is too good.yea...too good.
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