Monday, June 13, 2005

Changed hues

Changed hues
of our intense relationship
like shifting seasons
and the sands of time.

A tranformation
that has been gradual
yet peaceful
an awareness accompanied
with a quiet acceptance.

A wonderful journey ,a blend and
intermingling
of joy and pain
of bonding and connecting
of learning and growing.

We have shared and expressed
fought and loved
with an intimacy
that belies the fact that
we have just met.

And the miracle of it
never ceases to amaze me ...
How could we connect so magically?
How could we reflect so much of ourselves
in each other?

Like one soul in two bodies...

12 comments:

perspective said...

Beautiful beautiful... :)

Ritesh said...

How? a question I ask the mirror,
how much? I asked my soul,
how to? I asked god,
How many times? I asked pain,
I woke up and then questioned,
How long? I asked death....

You write what I have to stop myself from writing, and you write beautiful.. truthfully beautiful.

Hey my msn id is ritz_nair@msn.com hope to meet u online if you login.

gulnaz said...

when the connection happens, it happens with just one contact though it might not be obvious.

few relationships can withstand such intimacy.

beautifully written

mermaid said...

"like one soul in two bodies"...

It is always a pleasure to read the depiction of your evolution, Jyotsna.

Surinder said...

wonderful.. beautful .. very well expressed love :)

rash said...

Beautiful...it expresses, delights.:)

Manjusha said...

Lovely!

_Soulless_ said...

an awareness accompanied
with a quiet acceptance.

...a blend and
intermingling
of joy and pain

...an intimacy
that belies the fact that
we have just met

...one soul in two bodies...


Lines I adore. They remind me of a time I am condemned to remember. Sigh.

Thank you for sharing this. ^_^

stan laurel said...

such is the mystery of life!

. : A : . said...

Ah, the joy of two sould coming together. Well written.

Blue Athena said...

Loved it! :-)

Rama The Drama said...

Second paragraph is so profound!Good one Jo!